Love Scene"That was some pretty fancy shooting," said Blackie in a shocked tone."Just returning the favour, I guess this makes us even now," returned Monica.The sun was falling fast and long shadows streaked across the desert plane."I wonder what's happened to the others? It could be hours before anyone finds us. We'd better find some shelter. Nights approaching and it will be cold soon."The pair walked across the valley floor. Tall orange cliffs loomed above them. They were crossing a great canyon. Suddenly Monica pointed to the horizon. Something was shimmering in the setting sun."It's water," exclaimed Blackie. "If we follow the canyon we'll be there in an hour or so."The shimmering speck soon became larger and larger to reveal a crystal clear pool of water surrounded by several tall palms. Blackie and Monica rushed to the water's edge and took in deep gulps of water."That's better," said Blackie as Monica scooped up a handful of water splashing him with a mischievous giggle. The water
BrawlBlackie and Monica sat there stunned as Betty and Rachelle exited the stage. Blackie took a deep gulp of his drink and tried to ignore the cheering and whooping of the other patrons."Well, I never thought an air pump and a bottle of whipped cream could be used quite like that," said Monica wiping a gorb of cream from her face."Oh, you have no idea just how talented they are," said Madam Beaufax as she left to speak with a man at the bar. Blackie and Monica sat for a moment in awkward silence. They both went to speak but then paused. Just as Blackie was about to apologise for the whole disaster, a drunken roughneck staggered over."Whooooo! Hey Missy, you're lookin' mighty fine. Y...y... you know, you look just like that Princess from Furtopia. Ha! Anyways hows abouts you get that sweet arse up on the stage and do some dancin' for us?" he slurred as he groped towards her. Some of his companions let out a cheer and sloshed their drinks about.Monica slapped his hands away, "One does no
DoubtNicky looked up at Blackie, her eyes welling with tears. The light on the communicator had gone out. Blackie hung his head."So it was all for nothing," he said in a tone none of the others had ever heard before. "I was a fool to think that I could rescue Princess Monica. It was just beyond me.""Now you just wait a Gaddamn minute," interrupted Whitey. He pushed past the others and stood before Blackie. "Why did you bother gathering us all here for this mission if you we're just going to quit when things got hard? Hell, we've all been through worse, just being here is against all the odds. You can't quit now, I won't let you."Blackie looked up into Whitey's eyes and saw an honest conviction he had never seen before."Now I'm going to tell you something and it ain't easy to do, so you'd better listen up 'casue I'm not likely to repeat it," grumbled Whitey in a gruff voice. "Sure, we've had our differences but that all comes down to one thing, you we're always number one and it ate me u
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